A Little Critique

I read this in the New Yorker
&
I don’t like this poem.
This poem shares in the Romeo Juliet Complex-

Tree Heart/True Heart

The hearts of trees
are serially displaced
pressed annually
outward to a ring.
They aren’t really
What we mean
By hearts, they so
Easily acquiesce,
Willing to thin and
Stretch around some
Upstart green. A
Real heart does not
Give way to spring.
A heart is true.
I say no more springs
Without you.

_Kay Ryan

idk Kay, but Id say it is probably attachment here. The writer seems focused on the object of love as something for “her”/“him” I want You or no more spring. *sigh, instead I think if Kay had true love for you, he’d be worrying after you left, “how is my beloved doing now?, what is she/he doing now?, is he/she happy/no longer hurt by whatever it was that broke our relationship?…will my you heal?, will my you move on and find a good life again? maybe with me (could they come back to or only be happy by coming back to me)/or maybe not (the best thing for my beloved is to be as far away from me as possible) anyway I love you and I don’t really care about anything but you.” I think true love would think more like that. True, tree love isn’t that human, but true love has tree love qualities and then some.

So then I think about the utterly heartbreaking and confusing R & J

Do they really love each other…. Does Juliet love her man? Or Romeo J?

I guess if Romeo were really in love with Juliet he would keep his ducks in a row, and txt mssg the Father to see if J really had died? Maybe,,,,

And then,

If Juliet really loved romeo, she would know in exile he be missing her, steal some money from hermother’s drawer, use a rope to climb down the window he climbed his ass up and then Mrs. J at 2 A.M., dressed as a man (the bard, William would like that.) could then have hired a herself coach to go hook up with the man she loved in mantua Then they’d go and catch a ship to America or Mexico where no one would care who they are and therefore there’d be less of a reason for them to suffer from the insidious crime of love-harassment have a happy life and become a living fairy tale. This would have been the easier option. Instead a damn catholic priest had to get involved and Romeo has to infiltrate the heart of a masonically-owned city all while being a wanted man and the relationship just doesn’t work out because the timing is off. :o |

Occupy the Future: Panzer Orta

Panzer Dragoon Orta for the Xbox is one of the most wonderful visually imaginative video games that I have ever come across. Its predecessors panzer Dragoon, panzer Dragoon Zwei and the Famous Panzer Dragoon Saga were released on the Sega Saturn. The sega Saturn was the first of 32 bit systems which if you ask me between it the Playstation and the N64 had the most unique and innovative games released for play. The two games that really clinch my opinion on the matter of the Saturnâ??s uniqueness are the Panzer Dragoon series and Nights as well as the promising Burning Rangers which to this day I have not had the opportunity to play. Also on a personal note the Saturn was the first video game system I owned. Although I endlessly played through the demo of Sega Rally I aquired for it the first real game on the system for me was Panzer dragoon Zwei. The original panzer dragoon wowed everyone with its post apocalyptic feel, and dragon sculpted sparingly from a few well used polygons. The techno organic visuals felt so much more natural than other similar attempts at the oeuvre. It was followed by Zwei which surprassed the original graphically both in terms of imagination and object detail. There was an RPG based on the series released which I know little about and finally Panzer Dragoon Orta for the Xbox. In the series Panzer Dragoon Zwei upped the visual ante with improved creature design and realistic effects like rippling green water in the â sewer pipeâ?? level three. The game is episodic in the sense that each level is an episode with its own theme. Zwei ends after the sixth and Orta ends after the tenth. Each level culminates with a boss. Panzer dragoon Orta picks up where the series leaves off thematically but has a story and characters all of its own. Seeing as how Orta is the game in question I would like to deal with it specifically. When it came to choosing a 64 bit system, I was left in the dark. Should I go with a PS2 the Cube or the Xbox. Seeing that a new Panzer game was available for the Xbox was almost enough for me seeing Shenmue 2 available also helped. I bought Microsofts machine with my chosen game and a copy of SHenmue 2 Seeing that Sega was supporting the system also increased my hopes for the Xbox but Panzer Dragoon Orta was the clincher.

Control and Gameplay

The game is an on the rails shooter in 3D boasting for its time unparelled visuals, offering a very visceral shooting experience. Although the Panzer Dragoon series main appeal is and always will be in the visual department. The callsign of its gameplay is something that I really enjoy. The main thrust is to move your target across the screen while holding down a button that keeps your target recticle open. As it passes over enemies they get locked on, pass over as many enemies as you can and release the button and the recticles close and your Dragon lets loose with a homing shot which strikes all the targets simultaneously. The limit being around eight targets. Watch them go down and repeat. This leads to some pretty intense action as you move through real 3d space, not a gimmick or selling point now but it sure was then the Saturn being the first console to offer 3d environments like this. The whole series the original through Orta boasts a very busy feel often sending more enemy ships by you than any non expert player can hope to target. Zwei ended with an amazing duel in the sky with a very scary organic floating flower of a fish in a one on one dogfight battle. Orta follows the standard shooter formula by varying boss encounters with more hectic encounters with crowds of enemy ships or creatures have what you may. You have your gun and lock on rectiles what distinguishes it from shooters is a certain three dimensional freedom you can move the radar to look and target in 360 degrees. This can make it very intense when trying to gun down that last ship of a pack you missed as the next group approaches. In Orta the enemies always come in waves. The game captures the feeling of flight superbly but differs from all flight simulators in the fact that besides some fine tuning you don’t get to determine the direction you fly. The game is on the rails. Meaning the dragon always flies forward on a predetermined route as you can move up and down or left and right. So the path is predetermined and your maneuvering abilities are limited in usefulness to dodging blasts from enemies or navigating a particularly crowded screen. There is even a segment that limits that when your dragon is forced to run through a surreal wasteland environment where the enemies are organic monstrosities that look more like stomachs kidneys and turnips than anything else. Of course as always and this is I believe is ortas greatest strength there is perfect freedom of targeting. Any where in 3d space you can instantly target an move on. So even if you are not totally responsible for navigating the environment you always have to be aware of where everything is. Orta adds depth to the Dragoon formula by allowing you to switch between three forms of the dragon, a versatile main wing, a powerful heavy wing and a glide wing with three boost charges that allow you to position your dragon in space during the boss encounters. Being able to change to three forms of the dragon added depth to the gameplay, especially in areas where you really need the three glides the glide wing provides and it always takes a decision to switch from base to heavy as the heavy has so many drawbacks. The boss encounters I enjoyed always employed a trick with positioning to be able to incur damage on the boss. Many of the boss elements incorporate the positioning through gliding or drafting backwards. The glide-boost functionality gives you that much more freedom even though the game is still on the rails. You also need to use the glide to pass obstacles for instance in the first level you can use it to zip safely past protruding gears that block part of the path. Also new to Orta is the evolution items. You gain them at various places for taking out an entire wave of enemies. Though they look very cool they felt more like a gimmick than anything integral to gameplay. That doesn’t mean they are not important without acquiring enough of them Id imagine the final stages would be very difficult if not nigh impossible for a beginning player. To be fair the dragon did also evolve in Zwei. However in Orta there are three forms which can evolve independently and choosing which form to use and when is a very important part to the gameplay.

Highlights

The boss encounters are most memorable. You fight everything from large aircraft carriers. To a frosty the snowman like idol, to native creatures to a battalion of vicious dragonmares. Some of the model designs are breathtaking and when unlocked as a special feature you can view them independently in Pandora’s Box. Some such as the military machine in level 8 can be challenging. It is the cohesiveness of its diversity that makes the game such a success. It would not seem that the empires machines and the organic creatures would match so well thematically but in this reviewers opinion with the exception of one or two variants on the level where your dragon is forced to run along the earth not a single enemy seems out of place. Some of the highlights were, flying through the caverns on altered genos and looking out from behind the waterfalls over a panoramic valley. The ice shards left by the creature that is the mother of two wyvern children. The whole sestren level. The duel with the dragonmares and finally the ending after the credits have rolled. 

Graphics, Story and Feel

At release graphically there was nothing like Orta and even though all the titles of the new generation outshine it in terms of polygon count but in the arena of sheer imagination not many titles that can contend with it. The burning village that starts the game feels just like that. Altered Genos really feels like a tropical forest. The level with Sestren really does feel like a journey through the secrets of DNA. This sense of believability is all that I ask out of my games graphically whether they be made by an 8-bit NES or the Cell Chip. Orta’s graphics have this ambiance of something like the process of evolution. But also the deep seas or the dreams of a modern mermaid. They are really hard to describe you have to play or watch someone play through them to get my drift. 

The story concerns Orta a girl who is imprisoned because she is considered dangerous. She has a temper and an appealing personality. You can really feel and see her frustration. The dragon in this episode suffers from two much detail in the FMV cutscenes. The game opens with Panzer Dragoons custom Germanic Slavic rooted language of the future and an amazing cutscene. Orta herself is stunningly beautiful and in terms of sheer detail but not style the other games cant touch this entry to the series. You fly through a city against other dragons. There is still a sinister empire which doesn’t? quite know how to control its own technology. Come to think of it the whole series reminds me of Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind, there could potentially be some influence hidden from that series. The drone Abbad tries to convince Orta to join his cause and she has none of it. They are the only two characters of any strength as the empire is reduced to all the captivation of a group of cussing sailors. For me these two characters are enough. Of all the titles which have been plagued by indecipherable narratives, Orta’s is the most understandable.

While you might think that with 10 levels variety might be the selling point of this edition, it is the overall feeling of the game as a whole that I am sold on. It is the consistency of mood from level to level. The biggest discrepancies in mood are found between levels battling the natural enemies of a hostile world and fighting the empire itself. It definitively feels different when battling the empires ships trailing banners in the sky. The most impressive creatures visually were the mini boss creatures in all their variety. It actually feels real not so much a scenario as actual events you have lived through. This is my number one test for game greatness and Orta here passes. Overall Orta was an enjoyable experience and its fantastic organic imagery at times came close to true beauty… how many ‘games’ can claim This?

experiment in form

The Lady’s Last Cathedral

A madeline walking, the choirs all whisperish
Whistling halve-secrets aloud he’d often told her
So many, here and there, he’d said just like vows
So many that keeping them all was no longer
At issue.  Keeping track. Oh. How she’d tried keeping count!
These past years, her own private joke remembering loud
Those three words of his last subtle lesson-
“Listen here now!”
She’d heard him say departing. Nothing else
Mattering any more than this last spoken phrase and How
He’d so doted on her!  Was so worried about
Only her welfare.  In that ring of three around their fire.
All their treasures now fail to matter-  This is all his Truth now.

No.  Not an emptiness.  If there ever
Were anything to love then,
It is this
It is This
 It is THIS.
 

Wars and Avatars, (wish this could be published.0

Wars and Avatars
A white chaos in the Indigo Chorus

Late 2010, Avatar was news. Friends had sent IMs about it and I’d noticed blogs on it for months now. The ticket sales, (near 750 million domestic and 2.76 billion worldwide) indicated it was a phenomena. Avatar’s theme was transparent, its plot obscure. Other than the unseen energies of nature and a tribal culture all I had to go by were images of blue, beautifully rendered creatures displayed via Google News . A new race seared through the web, constellations adorning faces whose cat’s-eyes looked through the screen without sentience beyond an animal will for survival. As with the gallery painting everyone mentions, all clues indicated Avatar was something special. When my father came to visit he suggested we see it.
We drove through the bunkered down industrial complex of buildings and machines, once decried as urban sprawl until people gave up on the name calling as fruitless. In this urban landscape, one could only savor the hypocrisy of attending a film like Avatar by driving to the Megaplex ten miles south. Salt Lake City surrounding us sprawled in all directions for miles, one small appendage of a 21sth century behemoth sucking energy into its frame to glow with a toxic light. The most recent outcries over the way society grows rang in my ears with a tone of desperate futility. The electric hum of the city is almost silent but you can feel it. All the talk about our warming planet, dying ecosystems, the need to be Green and the undue strains our systems place on nature kept ringing in an insistent chorus as we drove to Jordan Commons.
The hollow feeling of the Jordan Megaplex seemed a phantasmal painting on a blank nihilistic backdrop. A black fire burned here, fueling apparent movement. Some in the crowd laughed, who knew at what. Others talked as if in a puppet show, while most passed through the mall-like atmosphere of the theatre’s food court, navigating countless vendors offering incredible helpings of our nation’s favorite foods. The only light that night was human motion and a tremendous quantity of electricity pulsating just below the visible spectrum.
Once you’ve selected a credit card these days, few services require anything or anyone else. We found a touch-screen for the IMAX theatre, simply inserted the card to see a map of all theatre seats magically display, letting us choose seats 13d and 14d. Tapping at the screen a few more times, our tickets purchased, an hour or so remained for the film to start. The employees talked to each other while guarding a tray of 3d Visors one of which they wore proudly on a string around their necks. Whatever Avatar was its mystique was building. As the crowd and ushers seemed halfway happy and so was I. I drank water from a fountain, the bright atmosphere of the theatre bubbling around us and for an hour nothing happened until they let us in taking our tickets. We had however made a slight oversight.
After we found our seats, I leaned back, trying to ignore advertisements and trivia and connect to the surrounding darkness with hope for inspiration or the semblance of aesthetic encounter. It was all I expected from the world’s most lucrative film. Avatar’s world seemed born from the cinema house’s legacy of a dark calm world, lit by an underhum of magic, light and energy; that of soft night and the illusion of starlight everywhere. Entering the theatre is a game in which we all know what to expect and still expect to be surprised.
Foremost in mind was Avatar’s ecological theme, the vague metaphysical question of the sentience of earth itself. How often and for how long have we wondered, is there a sentience to the earth, a Gaea moving things along, helping them grow, arranging them as she sees fit? For even with all the problems here, things on planet earth seem to keep working, moving and falling into place. I kept remembering the pictures in the media of these blue creatures, fascinating and bordering on ethereal. They possessed a novel quality, breaking new ground in our mainstream, burgeoning culture with a message we’ve always known was underneath.
My father left to go I didn’t know where and while relaxing in the quiet, a couple said, “I think these are our seats.”
“Perfect.” I thought, dead sure our tickets were 13 and 14D.
I had no tickets so I stumbled to explain: “I don’t know what went wrong. I apologize; my father has our tickets. He should be back very soon. Can we wait and see if a mistake has been made?”
We could be in row E, I thought, however 13 and 14 in row E behind us was filled. The two were accommodating and sat to the left and I waited, hoping he would return the film began; no such luck. The film started. A Marine in a space bay, popped into the theater in pristine 3-D. He emerged from his cryo-freeze sleep and started speaking to my now distracted mind. A group of people came to fill in the seats to our right. A little panicked, I rechecked the entrance way but my father was not in sight. Without the tickets I was just a scown (Na’Vi for idiot) but I’d learned by now not to go looking for someone when you’ve no clue where they might be. Immediately a boy, mid-twenties, slightly muscled from working out, wearing a white t-shirt with closely cropped hair surged up the aisle and said, “These are our seats.” and demanded I vacate.
I made an attempt to explain, “I’m waiting for my father to return so we could verify if our tickets were wrong; could you please be patient?”
He was in no mood to listen and didn’t allow half these words to come to conclusion before he’d become furious.
“Get OUT!”- turning heads in a small ripple around the two of us.
“No,I replied calmly. I will wait here till we can verify our seats are wrong.”
“THESE ARE OUR SEATS. Move or I’ll drag you out of here with my hands God Damn You!”
His friend backed him up, “You’d better get out of here dude or he will make you.”
“Go ahead and try,” I said. I will press charges. “Please simply wait.”
At this he exploded, “I’m going to bust you in your God-dammed face! Get Out”
“Go on, we’ll see what happens,” I said.

He prepped to throw a fake punch as a form of territorial threat and I decided to sit and accept whatever happens, was the best I could do now without giving up what might be our seats. I hoped my father would return so we could quickly resolve who they really belonged to because the man now red-faced in his white shirt continued shouting and cursing.
“Look, your attitude is unacceptable,I started. just wait. If-”

Thwack.

I had meant to say, “If we are in the wrong seats of course we will move but only moved through a word or two of the sentence before he had cuffed me on the head, sending my hat flying across the room (I loved that hat.) and twisting my spectacles badly enough that I needed to get them adjusted back to normal a few days later.
“Get the FUCK out!” he screamed.
Everyone in the packed theatre around us was now dead silent, no one had anything to say, most simply focused on the film hoping it would all blow over. It was just an angry young man and a stubborn young man out of solutions in a pointless confrontation.
More determined than ever now, I said, “NO! Please wait, we’ll know soon enough and if we need to move we’ll move.”, wondering what the hell my father was off doing with our tickets .
We were already several minutes into the film. The man in the white shirt stormed off by everyone in the aisle, furious.
The male of the couple sitting next to me said: “Listen, my advice would be for you to go and find your father.
This guy is only going to get worse. If you have your tickets, you can resolve this. You should go and find him.”
This made good sense, yet something in me didn’t want to back down at all from someone acting this uncivilized. Maybe we were in the wrong seats, but it felt better to sit here than go off to find my father and let this man think his method of acting should merit the result of two plush seats. So I waited.
Thirty seconds later my new friend was walking down the side aisle with an employee to solve our real-estate problem. I carefully explained the situation. Of course she said, “Well if you don’t have your tickets, let’s move-” and then in came my father holding some drinks.
Within seconds we were all standing to the side of the theatre, staring at our tickets at under the beam of a small flashlight, looking at sure enough tickets 13 and 14 D. The employee began to apologize to all of us saying it must be a computer mistake.
Then she caught herself, “Ah! You two are in the wrong theatre.“
Sure enough we didn’t belong in the IMAX theatre, but one adjacent; finally some clarity. I felt like a true idiot while simultaneously thinking, “How could an apparently grown human believe that what he did was a proper way to act?” I hurriedly walked back to the center of the aisle to grab our coats and bags, apologizing profusely to the couple next to me, briefly those to our right explaining the reason for the scene and apologizing again for my mistake but feeling irate myself by now.
This fellow yelling and screaming had acted like a small hurricane in a packed theatre and even struck me, was that excusable? I spoke to the employee, “I want to file a complaint and I want my hat back!” This was one too many waves to deal with. I was told Megaplex staff could do nothing, best to let it drop.
“No, I’d like file a complaint”.
“OK, sir, you can go to our office and make a complaint.”
Out of the theatre, our show starting soon, we were able to find a manager. I repeated the story while another story, I was soon to learn not altogether dissimilar, was unfolding in the dark we had just left. So the manager did what she could.
Security was summoned with a mic: “We have a guest who was getting violent in the IMAX theatre; please come over.” Soon a moustachioed man, with a kind gait and look of concern joined us. We explained the situation and they told us theatre staff could do nothing of themselves; if we wanted to press the issue, police would have to be called. “Beautiful, what now?”
The way he’d acted was clearly unacceptable and I desperately wanted him to know it, but to call the police? I couldn’t help but think about disturbing the movie further for everyone else trying to enjoy it. I said aside to my father, “would that be appropriate; what do you think?”
“Entirely your call.”
I didn’t want to exacerbate the issue further, however, the security guard had gone ahead and called them on his own. Within 2 minutes an officer was inside.
Retelling the scenario, I said, “I’m not at all sure about pressing charges, but I am sure he needs to know it isn’t right for people to act like that.”
“Of course not.” the officer said; “We can charge him on assault. Did anyone else witness the event?”
My thoughts weren’t working, my being was only a raw emotion that some things shouldn’t be. Two more police arrived handed me a clipboard and had me writing a report of this incident. Very soon, the man who had given me advice as well as the hothead in white were dragged out of the film and talking vociferously to officers while I was filling out the paper, too fast and in atrocious handwriting, glancing up occasionally to see this would-be-marine talking sincerely to a more powerful force.
Soon the officer was over and said, “I talked to him and he admitted to striking you in the face and throwing your hat. He says he feels bad about it and wants to apologize. It is entirely your choice if you want to press charges; if you do, we’ll take him into custody.”
“I only want him to be aware people can’t act like that and I want my hat back!” I paused, “but no I don’t wish to press charges.”
“Can I bring him over to apologize?” the officer asked.
“Sure, please do.”
The two men walked over, with no bluster. I stood from the bench to meet them, three of us trying for satisfactory resolution. In a peaceable confrontation I spoke first.
“Listen, I’m not going to press charges. I only want you to know you can’t treat people like that.”
“I really, really apologize” he said and continued, “I shouldn’t have done that. After you left, I was thinking about it the whole time and I felt really bad. I just snapped. I don’t know why.” All traces of anger were now gone.
“We were in the wrong theatre. I’m sorry. That was our mistake.” I said, “But please, please in the future don’t treat others like that.”
It was as if he were mechanized and I had pushed a button because he all of a sudden stood up straighter and said automatically,” Got it. OK.”
Later, I ran it through my mind several times; what the Hell was going on? It must have been one of the strangest exchanges I’ve ever had. Was this for real?
He then said, “I do want you to know, even if you hadn’t had the same seats from a different theatre, I shouldn’t have done what I did. It was completely wrong.”
We shook hands and that was the last of it. We’ll never meet again and I’m sure the badly written report is in now in a dumpster, hopefully recycle. I felt surprisingly better and we found the correct theatre, not IMAX although still 3D to find the previews still playing. I was now trying forcefully to push all thoughts of the matter away so as not to ruin any sympathetic contract with James Cameron’s phenomenon . This was entirely unnecessary as I became totally engrossed in the show without thinking why. It was captivating enough that it wasn’t until near the film’s end that I even began to remember the prior real-world event and draw the obvious parallels.
Avatar was simple and a truly beautiful tale. Rainbows of an indigo spectrum, the visual symphony of green, blue and purple, with oranges and reds providing flickers of light was arresting. Likewise, the whole sea-green undersea world, in the translucent and glowing air spoke of the common roots we share that are primal. The narrative, as simplistic it was in form, wore the film’s ethereal garment like the most gorgeous model and spoke volumes. Watching this tale of the roots of our race and society one couldn’t help but be moved.
I have tried the last few years to be aware of the illusions Hollywood seduces us with besides any truth it tells. Notorious for happy endings only a fool believes possible, with Avatar nothing’s changed. What one does with the inspiration received from California is crucial. Lifes too short to misuse these entertainments. The world’s highest grossing film, despite its rainforest of high-resolution sensations is a cartoon. Cartoons can help us see facts more clearly but they can also obscure the reality. Avatar at heart an elaborate cartoon is also a caricature of the happy ending.
Had our dispute over two seats evolved into a brawl, nothing good would have come of it, nor could there have a victory for either side. Would some Ewya have stepped in to back either of us and overwhelmed the entire security staff of the theatre as well as the police they’d call in, leaving the victor to face no consequence for a public brawl? Unlikely. In Avatar this is the thinking validated. The Na’vi get to keep their way of life and the military sent away without any unobtanium “cheddar.”
We have an example of the British relinquishing control of India. Can it happen again for green or human interests? Can history repeat to take the side of those who wish to do away with the likes of BP oil or the Chinese occupation of Tibet? How realistic is this cartoon that captured so many’s attention less than a year ago. No one I associate with likes our changes of the last hundred years, they are decried, but still the corporate Juggernaut craves its margins and diplomatic solutions. This is fact and straightforward enough for a good cartoon.
Is the planet sentient, an Organism; perhaps, perhaps not. This question is Avatar’s most novel contribution to our rapidly evolving mainstream culture. The film gives pause to the thought of earth as a being It asks us, does the ecosystems have will in what happens to here, or are humans now sole rulers of the show? Events happening to a purpose, the planet fighting back, Cameron’s film was enough to give pause.
What I am sure of is that for billions of years earth has been a sustainable system, nurturing life in a way no other planet we are currently aware of is capable. And one of the newest inventions in Mother Earth’s kitchen, Man, has reached a point of wreaking havoc with those systems. Ice caps, poisoned and disappearing salmon and countless other species both animal and plant, massive deforestation, chemical hazes, mountains and mountains of lethal and poisonous trash and now a whole ocean made of oil, we see atrocity after atrocity. Only the willfully blind can deny this. In this cinematic caricature of our reality, Avatar’s solution, called for or not, is violent revolt backed by Eywa, what in our world we know as the incompletely understood network of living matter.
And in a flash, as a battle waged onscreen towards the end of our viewing, as only hollywood battles can, similarities between the events the IMAX and those on the screen occurred to me with a jolt of insight. The Na’vi were sitting on Hometree; of value to both sides, and didn’t want to leave, of course not. Hotheaded humans attempted and succeeded in using force to remove them. They also wanted the squat and its benefits. Power seemed on their side and they took the land. The similarities ended there.
The Avatar’s front a complete revolution. Revolution, the American revolution, the French Revolution, the Communist Revolutions, the Hippie Revolution, untold other examples, is the gospel. Eywa routs the forces of human technology. In the actual world, I can only hope, society will save what remains decent in our way of life; it if it is to be saved at all. I also know that the avenue of war only scars that decency beyond recognition.
My personal incident ended with a handshake and a good feeling but so many cry for upheaval.. Can revolution work once again within the modern industrial-military complex today as it has in the past? Can we honestly expect upheaval, the battle so many now feel a need for, spurred by the much maligned impulse to save the earth?
Groups peacefully mobilizing in mass, like Martin Luther King or Mahatma Gandhi, against the century old net of corporate systems is highly doubtful. We seem to have run out of the energy. For such a project I can’t help feel hopeless. Violently removing the Monetary Monolith is impractical, if not impossible and thoroughly unobtainable. The incredibly destructive lethal machinery of world military would easily be able to suppress any revolution, for law and our comfortable lifestyle would back the oil, industrial farm and corporate manufacturing interests. Boycott them yes, but entirely? Good luck with that.
Can we return to a completely Na’vi lifestyle in order to find our real living? That more than anything, is illusion. The tribal way of life goes through a hell to cohere the little it does in our money driven world nor is there a way or place for it to isolate to maintain itself. The world as it is now will always draw such projects back into her loom. However, the cartoon is still right. Without addressing our greed and lack of connectedness as human beings there is no hope for things to get better.
Whenever I look at the situation or meditate on it, I am at a loss. What can be done to effectively change anything? Realistically, what can be done, fight a war you can’t win? In a vendetta against the nation, the companies, other peoples chosen lifestyle, victory is just a bad joke. Boycott harm with my dollar then? If for every dollar I spend on greener interests 1,000 are spent on unsustainable ones, will that give us our happy ending?
These are the commonly proposed solutions. To care at all means to be bound to oppose what is happening somehow; to learn to use our current rules to change this game and its rules. What we cannot forget is any scenario has solutions. This is not illusion. For as long as people have been evolving almost all of us have had roles along with a certain quota of energy to use as we may. In these jobs we contribute to the human ecosystem draw sustenance for our bodies and through them find activity for our minds. To the last such they have a place in the vast world-wide-web of human activity. Our roles will always have a place within both a corrupt or a much better society.
Before the unfolding of Avatar, the current sensation, -the real world put on a display that night. Wars like ‘s will wage as long as we pay to have them onscreen. If we can’t topple their terror head on, then the other option is to work within them for realistic avenues to a solution. I just pray the solutions for our monolithic society with its monolithic headaches can be found that eschew flared tempers and violence for handshakes.
There’s hope if we find solutions where idiots who can’t find the right seats are directed correctly by capable employees who assess the situation with a flashlight; where police, security guards and managers respond on the spot, know how to act and what to say. We’ll be o.k. if we can find solutions where senseless aggression is apologized for and both parties get what they want, the world of their choice, viewing it in peace; and at the end of it all, as when we exited the theatre that night, there’s the security guard standing outside with a hat.

A Proposal for the Success of the Movement

Preamble

On September 17th, a diverse, politically minded group of youth marched down to Wall Street, the world symbol of our deliberate exploitation of any resource: plant, animal, human, or the creations of the human soul; anything that manages to take root in the soil, asphalt or concrete and grow within our world. The new group marched against the 1% those who terrorize this planet, the butchers, warmakers, corrupters of the soul and the purity of art, sponsors of terrorists who themselves are nothing more than mental terrorists. On september 17th the group that was to become OWS marched against the root of our problems, those who control not just wall street but the majority of the organizations and institutions of culture still standing in 2011. We protested against, their depravity their increasing enslavement of the free and beautiful human soul and we walked together to protest their calculated brutality against who we naturally are. In the early years of the new millennium we have watched the top of the 1%’s twisted schemes of control tighten around our lives with every morning edition of the NewYork Times. Though not all of us knew who these insufferably proud, cutthroat abusers were by name, we could see their agenda and looking at the statistical data we have now, name them anonymously as the 1%. Those willing to stand against their cruelty answered the call and on September 17th marched and were denied their right to peaceably assemble. We then found a legal haven in Liberty Square and its inner boundary, the elegant opalescent ring that is Zucotti Park. Denied our Constituational right to take our protest to wall street and occupy, we gathered that night in our true protest, to use our legal right to assemble and then work together for transformation, our own, our country’s, our world’s. We gathered to assert our right to become the change we wished to see. When we are united we can work together. When we are in the same place we can learn to get along. When we live together we can eventually understand and tolerate one another. This is the only possible foundation for the peace this war torn world has so long wished for.
It has always been our constitutional right to do just this. According to the idea of Justice still here in America, this right is ours inviolably so long as we are peaceably assembled. All the excuses and spin in the world cannot deny that this form of assembly is exactly what we of OWS did for 58 days under the pressures of constant assault, intrusion, harassment and exploitation.

In the early days as we were assembling our new society in Liberty Square, a vision unfolded of all of us being free for once in our life. Free and not forced to slave in the systems created and perfected against the people and our human soul over the last hundreds of years. Free to instead work together to find the solutions we needed to take back the fading beauty and joy of life on Our Earth.

That was our protest; to leverage our talents and abilities within our newfound circle we could help humanity find her way out of her tightening noose. For almost two months, we continued to hold and sustain one another in one of the last ‘legal’ places to assemble in apparently the entire nation and we invited the world to join us speaking as the seed of a new society. The people supported us and we had become a sanctuary, a workshop, a kitchen, a library, an assembly, a group of dancers, drummers, singers, workers, builders, protesters, marchers, outreach workers, recyclers, composters, artists, chess players, programmers and designers, newspaper publishers, merchants, pamphlet discussers, public speakers, neighbors who actually knew each other, lovers, meditators and assembly members who had created a welcoming haven for those most scarred by the schemes of the world’s tyrannical, those who had been most rejected simply because they had had enough integrity not to comply. We sheltered all who journeyed to join us despite the wagging tongues of the New York press. Despite the fact that you just don’t do that here. That you don’t help people unless they ‘deserve’ it. That you will not be kind to your brothers and sisters unless they have somehow earned your kindness. We assembled against such a philosophy and this was the heart our protest: Human need not Corporate greed. This philosophy of acceptance and providing kindness was our constitutional right. We became everything that has been mentioned, artists lovers and activists. but most importantly we became friends united in a new community that was continuing to refine and organize herself. Then the Police Department of New York City came upon our sleeping community with ten minutes warning saying that we were a ‘fire hazard’. They did not give us an advance notice. They did not give us the option to change things ourselves so that no illegal raid would be ‘necessary’, instead they came in secret at 1:00 a.m. Surrounding the square with public funded spotlights and threw a peacefully resting community into chaos. They penned those who wished to stay into the circle of the camp and surrounded us in the center while they tore our property to pieces. in a matter of an hour the fire hazard, our new city, was gone and when nothing was left they closed in on 220 hundred of us linked together in solidarity. When there was nothing left within the park but people, peaceably assembled and in line with our right as stated in the constitution, wide awake at 3:00 a.m. and also outnumbered by 400 policemen and women, the NYPD moved in to rip us away. We were not a fire hazard. There were no longer any fire hazards left in the park and still the force that is in theory meant to protect our people brutally moved in harmed, collared and hauled us away like so many animals. All on a law that they invented in a printed declaration they tried to force upon us in the early hours of Tuesday November, . Hauled away in the people’s prison busses for trying to change our way of life in a way that would work and thus hopefully show our world the way to peace as well, we watched everything we owned thrown into a garbage compactor by the orders of one of the 1%. We had no physical power and they took our home.

I The Occupy Movement

For the political movement that is OWS to suceed we must assemble within urban spaces. Holding spaces within cities and boroughs is vital for a protest movement. It allows a place for both those within the movement to gather with the public we hope to present our view to. Holding an urban space represents to everyone that we will not bow down to the unconstitutional laws of the modern city until those laws become just and accommodating to the needs of human beings. Strategically by occupying a public space we occupy the police forces freeing others to assemble less harrased the city over. However taking a space in a city like New York is not actually a sustainable act of protest. It drains the painfully earned resources of those who support us, while giving back the returns of political ‘awareness’ and entertainment for those following on youtube and livestream.

So as necessary as our action is to form the movement, we absolutely must find ways to leverage the same real kinds of power those we oppose have slowly monopolized over hundreds and hundreds of years. As the game is set now, protesting within the current laws with a home for assembling like we had for two short months in Liberty Square is not sustainable in terms of human energy, especially in a city organized as New York is.

According to the American rules of protest citizens can protest in the daytime, but then have to leave the assembly to find lodging at night. By their rules, we of OWS still have to be a part of the system which we protest. “Overnight lodging is not tolerated,” to quote the words of Oakland police spokeswoman Johanna Watson. We no longer live in a country where it is the actually accepted that: “If you don’t likes the way things are going you are always free to join together in order to change them.” Instead in 2011 we are not allowed to simply and peaceably assemble for a term long enough to effect any change and when we do assemble we are set upon with every tactic and disturbance the 1% can manage to bring against us. When we assemble to unite and join in friendship and peace, and when we assemble to speak for a better world, they declare war against us and our dream. They refuse to listen to our wishes, our hopes or human needs so it is up to us to find ways to fight back or find places that they cannot legally approach to fight us in the beginning phases of this so very vital movement.

For the 99% to hold as many public spaces as we can is the genesis of this movement. However with political occupations in public spaces where structures and overnight stays are not allowed, as is now the case with the sacked liberty square, it is very difficult to organize our efforts, together, as a real community, on site. With backup locations we are legally free to live on we can strengthen incredibly our blossoming efforts to peaceably assemble.

In America in 2011, We the people live in a land that is an escalating example of legalized oppression. However, when as individuals united, we decide to stand against those who work to oppress us, then when they assert by force the illegal ability to have their way and evict us from public places as well as imprision us, our only option to return the movement to its original strength is to reoccyupy and assert Justice only to be dispersed again. Such a strategy, no matter how unjust the context it would unfold in, only depletes our energies. To be torn down time and time again hurts all of us who care enough to leave our old lives, leave the rules of a broken society and occupy a space. We will likely continue to be torn down so long as the unconstitutional Hooverville laws still exist. To win, as we all wish for, requires that we evolve as a movement because as the scenario has unfolded after our arrest success through our current tactics is unlikely.

We need Real Strength for this movement.

II Land

With the current occupiers strategy, every time we take a place we place our freedom at the whims of whatever the legal interpretation of our right to be in that space is. Each time we move to permanently occupy an urban area, we set our necks voluntarily under the guillotine. Those who have joined us and whose lives have always been marginalized from the accepted way of doing things in the 21st century are left with no reason to stand with us. Their choice is either: spend ones energies to survive on ones own or support the movement and hope the movement will take care of you somehow. As the movement exists now, this is not a fair choice to put to anyone. We have not given enough people enough reason to believe the risk will be worth it. Signs and marches and rallies are about public opinion in the hope to effect that opinion enough to someday unite the 99%. The theory being once as 99% we are united nothing can defeat us, in other words once we all agree and stand together we will then start taking the real, effective actions to break the chains we are in and overthrow those who have engineered them. However, why not start those actions now?

If we owned an area of land at least the size of Liberty square, either somehow within the city itself or somewhere within walking distance of one of the Upstate Train lines that leave from grand central station, then the occupiers of that branch of our new movement could not be legally evicted. Those who oppose our dream could not take our generators or solar panels. A true sanctuary to organize withing would act as an incredible support for the continued efforts to occupy urban spaces with our extremely valid philosophy of civil disobedience. Also we could begin to leverage for the movement a new type of strength, that of generating our own resources. Land can grow things Cement cannot, cement can only take life from us and impel us to wander. Beginning to grow our own, healthy, unpoisoned food to help sustain this peaceful revolution is absolutely one of the most powerful forms of protest we could make. Instead of throwing tea into the ocean, lets have the new American revolution grow life from the earth and make things with our own hands. A statement like this is one, our opponents, those who say we are entitled and are simply refusing to work, will have to respect or sound like fools. The people will respect a statement/vocation such as this also, particularly if the strategy spreads to every occupation in this global movement. Occupying at least some outlying and hopefully urban areas also, legally, without the threat of eviction, will give us more of the time and support we need until we can use our voice to change the existing laws and find a way to permanently occupy public parks and the other public sanctuaries as places for constructive change citywide. The fact that we did not own Zucotti park, meant that even if our town planning working group had passed a proposal at a GA no one would have had to abide by it. Also our consensus that no drugs or alcohol were to be within the park boundaries was also not respected and didn’t really have to be. The movement that agreed to that consensus did not own the park. Consensus would have a much strongfer meaning if we owned the property we hold general assembly in, a true general assembly that can actually decide what it is we will agree to and do as a new community. I also feel it is extremely important to utilize the tremendous generosity of the people who have supported us with working proposals for occupations and acts of civil disobedience that begin to support and sustain themselves. When we can manage this, we will become just that much more part of the necessary global solution. Having enough of these satellite communities we legally own, could unite the movement nationwide by giving the travelers to the occupations places to learn, work, rest and receive guidance on their diverse tactics. Our network of havens would then become the workshop for the world we would like to see; a palpable alternative to the malevolent systems created by the 1%. The whole nation would be able to see us evolving into something even more real, more solid and much more likely to succeed than we are now.

III Winning a just world

It is not likely the 1% will listen to noise alone. As the awakening 99% we have to begin to work together and support each other. The people united will never be defeated and before we can mobilize as an undefeatable union, one that cannot be denied her just demands, we will need to create a way of coexisting that cannot be taken away from us by a handful of tactical decisions on the banking families part. The sooner we can do this, the sooner we will be free of the annoyance and terrible harm that can be inflicted on us by a few phone calls, memos and emails. Instead, with our awareness on the day of the people’s happiness and freedom we can work together, sit together, assemble together, sing together, eat together and rest the nights together and dream of the world about to be born. The inspiring future everyone in Liberty Square and the inner ring of Zucotti is gathering to work for, the one we have expressed to the nations with all of our hearts.

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